Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer in the past tense: use “I had” and “I was.” Say “bike” clearly, and use “be careful” rather than “be carefully.” Add one specific memory or detail, and connect your reason with “because” or “although.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my family or friends in the park. I loved the feeling of riding fast, although we had to be careful.

제안: Give a direct answer, then explain who commonly rides bikes and why. Avoid fillers such as “like,” correct “they riding” to “they ride,” and finish your thought instead of ending with “or.” Use a specific example, such as students cycling to school or friends riding for exercise.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. Many ride them to school because they are convenient and affordable. Others cycle with friends for exercise or fun.

× I have a bike when I were a child

✓ I had a bike when I was a child

The question asks about a past time, so use the past-tense forms had and was. Use was with the subject I.

× with my family or friend

✓ with my family or friends

When referring generally to friends, use the plural form friends. You could also say with a friend if you mean one person.

× it's also need to be carefully

✓ you also need to be careful

After the linking verb be, use the adjective careful to describe a person. Carefully is an adverb. The corrected wording also gives the need to be careful a clear subject, you.

× The bike is popular in our country

✓ Bikes are popular in our country

Use the plural noun bikes when speaking generally about bicycles, rather than referring to one specific bike.

× not in the every age but in my age

✓ not among people of every age, but among people my age

Among is more natural when discussing groups of people. People my age is the natural way to refer to people in the same age group.

× the every age

✓ every age

Do not use the before every. Every already determines the singular noun that follows it.

× the students they riding bike to go to school

✓ students ride bikes to go to school

Use the simple present ride to describe a regular activity. The original form riding needs an auxiliary verb if you intend to use the present continuous, and the extra they is unnecessary.

× riding bike

✓ riding bikes

Use the plural bikes when talking about riding bicycles in general. A singular count noun would need an article, as in riding a bike.

× with friend

✓ with friends

Use the plural form friends when referring generally to friends. If you mean one person, say with a friend.