Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再说明大约几岁时得到它。“it was about 12”指代不清，建议明确说“when I was about 12”。“set a bike for to pro to praise me”表达不自然；如果你想说父亲为了奖励你而买了自行车，可以说“bought me a bike as a reward for getting good grades”。减少重复和填充词，并补充一个简短细节。

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about 12, after I got good grades at school. My father bought it for me as a reward, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

제안: 用完整、清晰的句子直接表达观点，例如“Bikes are becoming more popular in my country”。避免重复使用“uh”，并修正语法：“bikes are becoming increasingly popular”。你已经提到街上能看到很多骑行团体，可以进一步说明原因或举出具体场景；结尾也要使用完整句子。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country. These days, I often see groups of people cycling together on the streets, especially at weekends. Cycling is a convenient way to exercise and explore the city.

× If my memory serves me right, it was about 12.

✓ If my memory serves me right, I was about 12.

这里说的是学生当时的年龄，因此应使用“I”指代说话者，而不是“it”。建议根据句意确认代词所指的人或事物。

× I had a better score, so my father set a bike for to pro to praise me.

✓ I had a better score, so my father bought me a bike to praise me.

表达目的时用“to + 动词原形”，不能说“for to praise”。此外，“set a bike”在这里搭配不自然；表达父亲买自行车奖励我，可说“bought me a bike”。

× I think bike becoming more and more popular than before.

✓ I think bikes are becoming more and more popular than before.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。泛指一类可数名词时，通常使用复数形式。

× I think bike becoming more and more popular than before.

✓ I think bikes are becoming more and more popular than before.

“becoming”是现在分词，不能单独作谓语。描述自行车目前越来越受欢迎这一变化时，应使用现在进行时“are becoming”。

× Bike becoming increasing popular more and more than before.

✓ Bikes are becoming increasingly popular.

“increasingly”修饰形容词“popular”，需要用副词形式；“increasing”不能在这里直接修饰“popular”。也可以使用“more and more popular”，但不必同时重复使用“increasingly”。