Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，也提到了骑车的地点和喜好，但有明显的语法和表达问题。描述童年经历时应使用过去时，例如“had”和“rode”；“write ride”应改为“ride”，而“like ride”应改为“like riding”。“near my near the park”有重复。建议用一句话直接回答，再补充具体地点或感受，并避免重复表达“喜欢骑车”。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it near the park, and I really enjoyed cycling there.

제안: 你表达了自己的观点和原因，但句子不够完整，且有较多重复和停顿词。“small small”“and and”“except for except from”应删去重复部分；“No place to ride a bicycle”缺少主语和谓语，可改为“There are few places to ride”。注意问题询问的是整个国家，因此可以区分城市和乡村的情况，并用连接词让解释更连贯。

예시: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large, busy cities. There are few safe places to ride, although cycling is more common in the countryside.

× I have a bike when I was young and I can write ride it very well. I often ride a bicycle near my near the park.

✓ I had a bike when I was young, and I could ride it very well. I often rode a bicycle near the park.

这段话描述的是小时候的经历，应使用过去时：have 改为 had，can 改为 could，ride 改为 rode。“write”以及“my near”看起来是口语中的重复或说错后重新表达，不属于所列语法问题，因此在通顺的更正句中删去。

× I like ride a bicycle very much.

✓ I like riding a bicycle very much.

like 后面可以接动词-ing形式，因此 ride 应改为 riding。也可以说 like to ride。

× Um, no place to ride a bicycle and and except for except from the countryside.

✓ There is no place to ride a bicycle except in the countryside.

原句“No place to ride a bicycle”缺少谓语，不能独立构成完整句子。表示“没有地方……”时，可以用“There is no place...”。

× Um, no place to ride a bicycle and and except for except from the countryside.

✓ There is no place to ride a bicycle except in the countryside.

表示“除了在乡村以外”时，应使用“except in the countryside”。“except from”不适合这里的表达。