Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then add one clear detail about when or where you rode your bike. Correct the verb phrase: say “I enjoyed riding it” rather than “I usually enjoy the ride it.” Use “in the local park,” not “on the local park.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike that my father bought me when I was a child. I enjoyed riding it in the local park near my house, especially on weekends.

제안: Your answer is relevant and includes useful reasons, but make the list more natural and avoid the phrase “going to shopping.” Say “going shopping” or “shopping.” You could also add a specific example, such as people using bikes to travel to nearby shops or train stations.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in Japan, particularly in cities. People use them to commute to work or school and to go shopping because they are convenient and inexpensive. For example, many people cycle to the nearest train station.

× I usually enjoy the ride it on the local park near my house.

✓ I usually enjoyed riding it in the local park near my house.

The answer refers to the speaker's childhood, so the habitual action should be in the past tense: use enjoyed rather than enjoy.

× I usually enjoy the ride it on the local park near my house.

✓ I usually enjoyed riding it in the local park near my house.

Enjoy is followed by a gerund, so ride should be riding. Put the object it after the gerund: riding it.

× I usually enjoy the ride it on the local park near my house.

✓ I usually enjoyed riding it in the local park near my house.

Use in for an activity taking place within a park. On is not the appropriate preposition here.

× People often use them in various situations for commuting to work, getting to school, and going to shopping because it's really convenient and economical.

✓ People often use them in various situations for commuting to work, getting to school, and going shopping because it's really convenient and economical.

The idiomatic expression is go shopping, without to. Remove to before shopping.