Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsın ve annenin desteğiyle ilgili bir ayrıntı vermen cevabı kişiselleştiriyor. Ancak zaman uyumuna dikkat et: geçmişten bahsederken “my mom taught me” demelisin. “But it's my mom's help” doğal bir ifade değil; “With my mom’s help” kullanabilirsin. Ayrıca “enjoy” fiilinden sonra fiilin -ing hâli gelir: “enjoyed riding.”

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I was quite scared the first time I tried to ride it, but my mom taught me how. With her help, I overcame my fear and enjoyed riding around with my friends.

제안: Başlangıçta soruya net yanıt vermen iyi, ancak devamındaki fikirler dilbilgisi ve anlam bakımından anlaşılması zor. “Every child's dream” yerine genel bir ifade olan “Many children dream of...” kullanabilirsin. “Birthday presents or and they had a remarkable notes” bölümünü yeniden kur; çocukların bisiklet istemesiyle okul notları arasındaki bağlantıyı açıklığa kavuştur. İstanbul’daki bisiklet olanaklarından söz ederken kastın bisiklet yollarıysa “bike lanes” de. Her fikri kısa, açık ve doğal cümlelerle bağla.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children dream of getting one for their birthday, and adults often use bikes for exercise. In Istanbul, there are also bike lanes and cycling routes, although traffic can make cycling difficult in some areas.

× My mom tells me how to ride it even though I was very scared to do it the first time.

✓ My mom told me how to ride it even though I was very scared to do it the first time.

The sentence describes a childhood event in the past, so told is the appropriate past-tense form instead of tells.

× But it's my mom's help.

✓ But it was my mom's help.

The surrounding events happened in the past, so use was rather than the present-tense contraction it's.

× I overcame that fear and I enjoyed to ride that bike with my friends.

✓ I overcame that fear, and I enjoyed riding that bike with my friends.

The verb enjoy is followed by a gerund, the -ing form of a verb. Use riding, not to ride.

× Every child's dream is to have a bike for their birthday presents or and they had a remarkable notes in their school.

✓ Every child's dream is to have a bike as a birthday present, and they had remarkable notes in their school.

A bike given for one birthday is a birthday present, so present should be singular. Also, notes is plural and cannot be used with the singular article a; remove a.

× Every child's dream is to have a bike for their birthday presents or and they had a remarkable notes in their school.

✓ Every child's dream is to have a bike as a birthday present, and they had remarkable notes in their school.

Or and and are incorrectly used together here. Use and to connect the two ideas.

× Every child's dream is to have a bike for their birthday presents or and they had a remarkable notes in their school.

✓ Every child's dream is to have a bike as a birthday present, and they had remarkable notes at their school.

Use at school to refer to the school as an institution or place of study. In this context, at is more appropriate than in.