Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答“有”，再补充一两个具体细节。注意使用过去时，表达“喜欢骑自行车”应说“liked riding a bike”；“自行车”拼写为“bike”，而不是“bite”。句子中“my back is my first bite”不清楚，可改为“my first bike was blue”。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it, even though it was a little too big for me. It was blue, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

제안: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再说明它的用途。注意语序：可以说“Bikes are popular in my country”；“交通工具”更自然的表达是“a popular means of transport”或“an important form of transportation”。补充细节时，可具体说明人们骑车上学或上班。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to school or work because they are convenient and affordable. They are especially useful for short journeys.

× Yes, yes, I like ride bite very much and my back is my first bite is blue and a bit big for me to ride it.

✓ Yes, I liked riding bikes very much. My first bike was blue and a bit big for me to ride.

问题在于回答描述的是童年经历，应该使用一般过去时。将“like”改为“liked”，将“is”改为“was”，以保持时态与问题中的“when you were a child”一致。

× Yes, yes, I like ride bite very much and my back is my first bite is blue and a bit big for me to ride it.

✓ Yes, I liked riding bikes very much. My first bike was blue and a bit big for me to ride.

“like”后面可以接动词的 -ing 形式，因此不能说“like ride”，应说“like riding”。结合童年语境，改为“liked riding”。

× Yes, yes, I like ride bite very much and my back is my first bite is blue and a bit big for me to ride it.

✓ Yes, I liked riding bikes very much. My first bike was blue and a bit big for me to ride.

这里是在泛指自己喜欢骑自行车，应用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“bike”。泛指一类事物时，通常可以使用可数名词的复数形式。

× Yes, like in my country is a very important transportation for people to go to school or go to work.

✓ Yes, bikes are a very important form of transportation in my country for people going to school or work.

原句“In my country is...”缺少主语，句子结构不完整。应补上主语“bikes”，并使用相应的谓语“are”。“like”在这里不是句子必需成分，可以删去。

× Yes, like in my country is a very important transportation for people to go to school or go to work.

✓ Yes, bikes are a very important form of transportation in my country for people going to school or work.

“transportation”通常作为不可数名词使用，不能直接说“a transportation”。可以改为“a form of transportation”，在可数名词“form”前使用冠词“a”。