Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接且有具体细节，也使用了过去习惯表达“used to”。注意区分“bike”和“bite”，并将“told me how to write it”改为“taught me how to ride it”。最后可以用更自然的连接方式串联日常活动和感受。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents gave me a bike for my eighth birthday, and my older brother taught me how to ride it. After school, I used to cycle around the neighborhood almost every day, which I really enjoyed.

제안: 回答有明确观点和原因，但需要修正主谓一致和名词复数：“bikes”“students”。“commute to work in school”表达不清，可改为“commute to work or school”；“perform cycling”不自然，可用“cycle”或“ride bikes”。补充具体出行场景会让例子更清晰。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many students and office workers ride them to school or work, especially in the morning. It’s an affordable and convenient way to get around, particularly for short journeys.

× Yes, I think bike are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work in school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work or school.

这里的 bike 泛指自行车，应使用复数 bikes，与 are 及后面的 them 保持一致。表达“通勤去上班或上学”时，应使用 to work or school，而不是 to work in school。

× Yes, I think bike are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work in school.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work or school.

表示通勤的目的地时用 to；此处要表达“上班或上学”，可说 to work or school。in school 通常表示“在上学期间／在学校里”，不适合表达通勤的目的地。

× For example, a lot of student and office workers perform cycling in the morning since it is cheap.

✓ For example, a lot of students and office workers perform cycling in the morning since it is cheap.

a lot of 后面接可数名词复数。student 是可数名词，这里应改为 students，与后面的 office workers 保持并列一致。