Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly using the past tense, since the question is about your childhood. Use “didn’t have” rather than “have not,” and say “a bike” or “any bikes.” You could add one brief detail, such as why you didn’t have one.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived near my school, so I usually walked there.

제안: Your answer gives relevant reasons, but reduce fillers and avoid repeating phrases. Use “a great way” and “a bike,” and say “travel from one place to another” or “carry things.” Make the second reason a complete, clearly linked sentence.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to travel from one place to another. They’re also useful for carrying shopping or other small items, especially in busy areas.

× No, I have not any bike when I am a child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a time in the past, so use the past tense. In a negative past-tense sentence, use did not + the base form have. Use was, not am, for a past state.

× No, I have not any bike when I am a child.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. A bike is the natural phrasing here.

× Yes, of course bikes are very popular in my country uh, because it is great way to uh, commute one place to another. Moreover, it also very helpful to uh, to take uh, to take items uh, in the bike.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are very popular in my country because they are a great way to commute from one place to another. Moreover, they are also very helpful for carrying items on a bike.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they to agree with bikes.

× Yes, of course bikes are very popular in my country uh, because it is great way to uh, commute one place to another. Moreover, it also very helpful to uh, to take uh, to take items uh, in the bike.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are very popular in my country because they are a great way to commute from one place to another. Moreover, they are also very helpful for carrying items on a bike.

Way is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a great way.

× Yes, of course bikes are very popular in my country uh, because it is great way to uh, commute one place to another. Moreover, it also very helpful to uh, to take uh, to take items uh, in the bike.

✓ Moreover, they are also very helpful for carrying items on a bike.

The clause it also very helpful is missing the linking verb are. Use a form of be before an adjective, as in they are helpful.

× Yes, of course bikes are very popular in my country uh, because it is great way to uh, commute one place to another. Moreover, it also very helpful to uh, to take uh, to take items uh, in the bike.

✓ Bikes are a great way to commute from one place to another. They are also helpful for carrying items on a bike.

Use from before the starting point in the expression from one place to another. For carrying items using a bicycle, on a bike is the natural preposition; in the bike is not appropriate in this context.