Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，也提供了礼物来源和骑车活动等细节，但出现了较多重复和自我纠正，如“got I've got”“bike bike”和“with with”。注意使用过去时，并把“骑车和朋友出去”表达为“rode it with my friends”。建议先给出直接回答，再补充一到两个具体细节。

예시: Yes, I did. My dad gave me a bike for my birthday, and I often rode it around the neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 观点明确，并提到了共享单车和出行便利这两个相关理由。不过，“every workers”应改为“every worker”或“many workers”，“share bikes”可改为“shared bikes”；“go to the school or company”表达不自然，可说“travel to school or work”。句子较长，建议用连接词分开说明原因，并避免重复“popular”。

예시: Yes, definitely. Shared bikes are common on the streets, and many students and workers use them to get to school or work. They’re convenient, especially for short journeys.

× Yes I did. I got I've got a bike bike from my dad.

✓ Yes, I did. I got a bike from my dad.

这段回答谈的是小时候的经历，应使用一般过去时。这里“I got”与“I've got”重复且时态混杂；保留“I got”即可。另外，“bike bike”是重复表达，删除一个“bike”。

× My dad gave it to me as a birthday present and I usually rode this bike go out with with my friends.

✓ My dad gave it to me as a birthday present, and I usually rode this bike when I went out with my friends.

“rode this bike go out”把两个动词直接连接，句子结构不完整。可以用“when”连接两个动作，并将“go”改为与过去语境一致的“went”。“with with”重复，保留一个“with”即可。

× There are many bikes, share bikes on the streets, and every student and every workers ride bikes to go to the school or company and it's very convenient, so I think bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ There are many bikes, including shared bikes, on the streets, and every student and every worker rides bikes to school or work. It's very convenient, so I think bikes are very popular in my country.

这里“share bikes”表示“共享单车”，需要用过去分词“shared”作定语修饰“bikes”。“shared bikes”是正确表达。

× There are many bikes, share bikes on the streets, and every student and every workers ride bikes to go to the school or company and it's very convenient, so I think bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ There are many bikes, including shared bikes, on the streets, and every student and every worker rides bikes to school or work. It's very convenient, so I think bikes are very popular in my country.

“every”后面接可数名词单数，因此应说“every worker”，不能说“every workers”。建议记住结构“every + 单数可数名词”。

× There are many bikes, share bikes on the streets, and every student and every workers ride bikes to go to the school or company and it's very convenient, so I think bikes are very popular in my country.

✓ There are many bikes, including shared bikes, on the streets, and every student and every worker rides bikes to school or work. It's very convenient, so I think bikes are very popular in my country.

“every student and every worker”中的“every”分别限定两个单数名词，通常搭配单数谓语，因此应使用“rides”，而不是“ride”。