Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答过去的经历要使用过去时，开头可直接说 “Yes, I did.”。第三句 “When I was a child and that was...” 结构不完整，可改成完整句。表达“四个轮子的自行车”时，可以具体说明是普通两个轮子加两个辅助轮；这样比说自行车有四个轮子更自然。删去重复的 “I definitely have a bike”，并用一两句补充辅助轮如何帮助你保持平衡。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was little, I had a bike with two small training wheels attached to the back. They helped me keep my balance while I was learning to ride. I eventually learned to ride without them.

제안: 开头已经直接回答问题，后面可以合并重复的表达，让回答更简洁。“keep their healthy” 应改为 “stay healthy” 或 “keep fit”；“electric bags” 和 “normal bags” 应为 “electric bikes” 和 “regular bikes”。描述普及程度时，用 “more common/popular” 比 “more famous” 更自然。可以补充一个具体原因，例如电动自行车方便通勤。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them to get around or to stay fit. That said, electric bikes have become more common than regular ones because they make commuting easier.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

考官问的是“Did you have...?”，询问过去的情况，因此回答也应使用过去时。这里的“do”是现在时，应改为“did”。

× I definitely have a bike.

✓ I definitely had a bike.

这句话是在说明小时候是否有自行车，时间背景是过去，因此应使用“had”，而不是表示现在拥有的“have”。

× When I was a child and that was a special bike with four wheels.

✓ When I was a child, I had a special bike with four wheels.

原句以“When I was a child”引出时间状语从句，后面直接用“and that was”连接，结构不自然。可补上主句主语“I”和谓语“had”，表达“小时候我有一辆特别的自行车”。

× Typically the bikes are just two wheels.

✓ Typically, bikes have just two wheels.

原句中的“are”不能直接表示“自行车有两个轮子”。描述物品所具有的部分时，应使用“have”；这里也不需要定冠词“the”来泛指自行车。

× I can say there are a lot of people, especially young people, who are riding their bikes on the street to keep their healthy.

✓ I can say there are a lot of people, especially young people, who are riding their bikes on the street to stay healthy.

“healthy”是形容词，不能放在物主限定词“their”后面充当名词。这里可以说“stay healthy”（保持健康），也可以说“keep healthy”。