Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer in the past tense because the question is about your childhood. Use “when I was a child” rather than “on my child,” and add one relevant detail, such as what you used the bike for.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: Your answer addresses the question and gives examples, but improve subject–verb agreement and natural phrasing: say “most people use them” and “for their daily commute.” Avoid repeating “going to”; connect your examples smoothly.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for their daily commute, especially to get to work or school, because they’re convenient and affordable.

× Yes, I do have a bike on my child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past time, so use the past-tense verb had rather than the present-tense phrase do have. Keep the answer in the past tense to match the question.

× Yes, I do have a bike on my child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

On is not the right preposition for describing the time when you had the bike. Use when I was a child or as a child.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country and most of the people use it as a mode of transportation from their daily basis, going to work or going to school.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and most people use them as a mode of transportation for their daily commute to work or school.

When referring generally to people in a country, most people is more appropriate than most of the people. Use the definite article the when referring to a specific, known group.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country and most of the people use it as a mode of transportation from their daily basis, going to work or going to school.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and most people use them as a mode of transportation for their daily commute to work or school.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use them so the pronoun agrees in number with the noun it replaces.

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country and most of the people use it as a mode of transportation from their daily basis, going to work or going to school.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, and most people use them as a mode of transportation for their daily commute to work or school.

From their daily basis is not a natural or correct expression in this context. Use for their daily commute to describe transportation used for regular trips to work or school.