Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答是否有自行车，并避免“hired”造成的意思偏差；如果想表达父母送的，可以说“my parents gave it to me”。注意过去时一致，将“enjoy”改为“enjoyed”，并修正“given from”为“given to me”或“bought for me”。删掉“I my”这类重复开头和填充词，补充一个具体细节即可。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents gave me my first bike, which was pink. I learned to ride it when I was about three or four, and I really enjoyed cycling around my neighborhood.

제안: 回答方向正确，但句子过长且结尾未完成。把理由分清楚：共享单车很常见，骑车方便又有益健康。注意复数和搭配，如“shared bikes”“ride their own bikes”“ride a bike”；描述普遍情况时统一使用现在时。避免重复使用“because”，控制在三句左右。

예시: Yes, definitely. Bikes are popular in my country, especially shared bikes, which you can see all over the city. Many people ride them because they’re convenient for short trips and are a good way to stay active.

× I my first bike was given from my parents and it was a pink one

✓ My first bike was given to me by my parents, and it was pink.

原句中“I”后面直接接“My first bike was given...”，造成两个主语结构混乱。应删除多余的“I”，并调整句子结构，使“My first bike”成为主语。

× My first bike was given from my parents

✓ My first bike was given to me by my parents.

被动语态中表示动作执行者时，通常用“by”，而不是“from”。“to me”说明自行车是给“我”的。

× I really enjoy riding a bike when I was a child.

✓ I really enjoyed riding a bike when I was a child.

“when I was a child”指过去的时间，因此主句中的“enjoy”也应使用过去式“enjoyed”。描述过去经历时，要保持句子的时态一致。

× You can see a lot of shared bike on the road.

✓ You can see a lot of shared bikes on the road.

“a lot of”后面可以接可数名词复数。这里指许多共享单车，所以“bike”应改为“bikes”。

× Many people rode their own bike on the road.

✓ Many people ride their own bikes on the road.

这里是在说明当前普遍存在的情况，不是在讲过去发生的事情，因此应使用一般现在时“ride”，而不是过去式“rode”。

× Riding on bike is like a healthy lifestyle for everyone.

✓ Riding a bike is like a healthy lifestyle for everyone.

表达“骑自行车”时，通常说“ride a bike”，不需要在“riding”和“bike”之间加“on”。

× Riding on bike is like a healthy lifestyle for everyone.

✓ Riding a bike is like a healthy lifestyle for everyone.

“bike”是可数名词单数，前面需要限定词。不过在“ride a bike”这一表达中，冠词“a”已经位于“bike”前。

× It was really convenient and it was good for

✓ It is really convenient and it is good for ...

这里是在解释自行车或骑车的普遍特点，应使用一般现在时“is”，而不是过去式“was”。原话在“good for”处中断，后面还需要补充适用对象或用途。