Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答没有正面回应问题，而且把“bike”说成了“bite”，导致意思不清。先直接说明小时候有没有自行车，再补充一个简短细节，例如谁给你买的，或你通常在哪里骑。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around our neighbourhood.

제안: 回答观点明确，也提供了原因和例子，结构完整。注意减少口语重复或误说（“a bus, busy city”），并将“distress”改为“de-stress”或“unwind”；“ride along in parks”可改为“ride in parks”或“ride along park paths”。此外，香港自行车是否普及可以表达得更准确一些，例如说明它更常作为休闲活动，而非日常通勤方式。

예시: Yes, I think cycling is fairly popular in Hong Kong, mainly as a leisure activity. Although the city is crowded, many people cycle to unwind after work or at weekends. For example, they ride along waterfront paths or around parks.

× Do you have a bite when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bite when you were a child?

句子中的时间状语“when you were a child”指过去，因此询问过去是否拥有某物时，应使用一般过去时“Did you have”，而不是一般现在时“Do you have”。

× I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in Hong Kong, because it is a bus, busy city.

✓ I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in Hong Kong, because it is a busy city.

这里需要用形容词“busy”修饰名词“city”。“bus”是名词，不能在此处修饰“city”；应删除它，改为“a busy city”（一个繁忙的城市）。

× For example, they often ride along in parks or along waterfront cycle paths at weekends.

✓ For example, they often ride in parks or along waterfront cycle paths at weekends.

“along”表示沿着某条路线移动，通常需要接道路、河岸等路线；“in parks”表示在公园里，因此此处不应把“along”与“in parks”连用。