Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then add one or two relevant details. Use the past tense consistently: say “I’ve always wanted to learn” rather than “I always really want to learn.” Avoid repeating the idea of wanting to learn, and replace the unnatural phrase “experienced having a bike” with “owned a bike.”

예시: No, I didn’t own a bike when I was a child. I first tried riding one as a teenager and found it really fun, so I’ve always wanted to learn how to ride properly.

제안: Make your position clear and support it with specific, connected details. Use “prefer cars to bikes,” not “prefer cars than bikes,” and say “in the daytime” and “at night.” Replace “in the yard” with the intended location, such as “outdoors,” and avoid fillers and repetition.

예시: Bikes aren’t as popular as cars in my country, mainly because the weather is very hot and sunny. Many people find cycling uncomfortable during the day. However, some people enjoy riding in the evening, when it’s cooler.

× I've never experienced having a bike as a child.

✓ I never had a bike as a child.

The phrase as a child refers to a specific period in the past, so use the simple past never had rather than the present perfect I've never experienced.

× As I'm getting older, uh, when I was a teenager I tried riding a bike...

✓ As I got older, when I was a teenager, I tried riding a bike...

The speaker is describing a past experience as a teenager, so the past-tense phrase As I got older fits the time reference better than the present progressive As I'm getting older.

× ...and I was I always really want to learn how to ride a bike.

✓ ...and I always really wanted to learn how to ride a bike.

This describes what the speaker wanted in the past, so wanted is the appropriate simple past form. Remove the repeated, incorrect was.

× In my country we prefer cars than bikes...

✓ In my country, we prefer cars to bikes...

The standard construction is prefer one thing to another, not prefer one thing than another.

× But some people do in the nights.

✓ But some people do so at night.

Use at night for the general time when something happens. In the nights is not the natural preposition and article combination here.