Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có thêm thông tin về món quà, nhưng câu nói còn nhiều lần ngập ngừng và tự sửa khiến câu trả lời thiếu trôi chảy. Dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán: “I had” và “I really enjoyed”. Cụm “enjoy the memorable moments” chưa tự nhiên; có thể nói “have fond memories of riding it”. Hãy nêu câu trả lời trực tiếp trước, sau đó thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về chiếc xe hoặc kỷ niệm với nó.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me as a birthday present, and it was bright red. I have fond memories of riding it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

제안: Bạn đã thể hiện rõ quan điểm, nhưng phần giải thích có nhiều lỗi diễn đạt: “private bikes from each family” không tự nhiên, còn “for people for residents in local to riding” sai cấu trúc. Hãy dùng “privately owned bikes/bicycles” và “public bike-sharing services”, đồng thời giải thích cụ thể vì sao xe đạp phổ biến hoặc chúng được dùng ở đâu. Nối ý bằng từ như “because” hoặc “while” để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Vietnam. Many families own bicycles, and some cities also have public bike-sharing services. People use them for short trips or to explore the city, especially in areas with dedicated cycling routes.

× When I was a child I have a I had a bike from my parents that was a birthday gift from them and I really enjoy the member memorable moments with that bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike from my parents. It was a birthday gift from them, and I really enjoyed the memorable moments with that bike.

The question asks about a childhood experience, so the answer should use the past tense. Use had rather than have and enjoyed rather than enjoy. The repeated words are speech disfluencies, not grammar errors.

× In Vietnam there are some private bikes from each family and also some public bikes for people for residents in local to riding around the city.

✓ In Vietnam, there are some private bikes for each family, as well as public bikes for local residents to ride around the city.

In this context, for each family expresses who the bikes are intended for more clearly than from each family. Also, local should come directly before the noun residents; in local is not the correct phrase here.

× In Vietnam there are some private bikes from each family and also some public bikes for people for residents in local to riding around the city.

✓ In Vietnam, there are some private bikes for each family, as well as public bikes for local residents to ride around the city.

After to when it marks an infinitive of purpose, use the base form of the verb. Therefore, say to ride, not to riding.