Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你直接回答了问题，也给出了原因，但重复使用了“because”和“too dangerous”，影响表达的简洁度。“They think it was too dangerous, but I do”意思不清，建议改为过去时并明确转折关系，例如说明父母不让你骑车，但你后来还是学会了。最后补全“learn how”后面的内容，说明学会了骑车。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents thought it was too dangerous to ride on the busy road in front of our house. However, I learned how to ride one later.

제안: 回答切题，理由也具体，使用了“because”和“Plus”连接观点。可以把“it can avoid traffic jams”改成更自然的表达，说明骑车能让人避开拥堵；另外，“environmentally friendly”描述骑车本身时可改为“it’s an environmentally friendly way to travel”。

예시: Yes, cycling is quite popular in large cities like Guangzhou, where I live. It’s convenient because cyclists can avoid traffic jams, and it’s also an environmentally friendly way to travel.

× They think it was too dangerous, but I do.

✓ They thought it was too dangerous, but I didn't.

这段话是在回忆童年，因此描述父母当时的想法应使用过去时：将“think”改为“thought”。后半句也应使用过去时，并补出与前文相对应的“think it was too dangerous”，所以用“didn't”代替“do”。