Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I did. I have a back when I was a child in my childhood time.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Yes, I would say it depends, um, personally back or sharing back, because in my country we can find them a sharing bike everywhere in the street.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答直接,但“back”应为“bike”;“when I was a child”和“in my childhood time”意思重复,而且时态应使用过去时。可以先直接回答,再补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的经历。
예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 40.0제안: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎,再说明共享单车或个人自行车的情况。“back”应为“bike”,“sharing back”可改为“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing schemes”;“find them a sharing bike”表达不自然。建议用“because”连接原因,并举出具体场景。
예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular, especially shared bikes in cities. They’re easy to find on many streets, so people often use them for short trips or to get to a nearby bus or subway station.
× I have a back when I was a child in my childhood time.
✓ I had a bike when I was a child.
句子讲的是童年时期的经历,属于过去时间,因此动词 have 应使用过去式 had。
× Yes, I would say it depends, um, personally back or sharing back, because in my country we can find them a sharing bike everywhere in the street.
✓ Yes, I would say it depends. Personally, I think bikes and shared bikes are popular, because in my country we can find shared bikes everywhere on the streets.
这里需要用 shared 修饰 bike,表示“共享的自行车”。sharing 是现在分词,不能在这个表达中代替 shared。
× Yes, I would say it depends, um, personally back or sharing back, because in my country we can find them a sharing bike everywhere in the street.
✓ Yes, I would say it depends. Personally, I think bikes and shared bikes are popular, because in my country we can find shared bikes everywhere on the streets.
表示自行车在街上时,通常使用介词 on,表达为 on the street 或 on the streets;此处不应使用 in。