Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答是否有自行车，并使用过去时，例如“I had a bike”。“body”应为“bike”，“I very like it”可改为“I really liked it”；“ready to my school”表达不清，可改为“rode it to school”。补充一个具体细节即可，例如自行车的颜色或用途，并用 because 说明原因。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to school almost every day because it was convenient and could carry my schoolbag.

제안: 明确回答“自行车很受欢迎”，并把“Definitely it is”改为更自然的“Definitely”。“chip”应为“cheap”，“sharing bikes”可以说“shared bikes”；注意主谓一致和代词，例如“they are easy to find”。最后一句没有说完，应补充完整原因或对比；避免使用不确定的口头填充词。

예시: Definitely. Shared bikes are very popular in my country because they are easy to find and inexpensive to rent. Many people use them for short trips, especially when public transport is inconvenient.

× Yes, when I was a child, I have a body...

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike...

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，应使用一般过去时。将 have 改为 had。根据上下文，body 应是 bike；这是词汇更正，不属于语法问题类型。

× ...a body which I very like it...

✓ ...a bike that I really liked...

关系代词 that 已经在从句中指代 bike，因此句尾不应再重复使用 it。可记住：关系代词作从句宾语时，通常不再加一个代词重复指代它。

× ...which I very like it...

✓ ...that I really liked...

very 通常不直接修饰动词 like。表达“非常喜欢”时，用 really 放在动词前：really liked。

× I ready to my school every day...

✓ I rode to school every day...

I ready to my school 缺少句子的谓语动词。结合上下文要表达“骑车上学”，应使用动词 ride；由于描述的是童年经历，改为过去式 rode。

× Definitely it is uh specifically the sharing bikes are everywhere...

✓ Definitely, shared bikes are everywhere...

原句中 it is 和 the sharing bikes are 两套结构混在一起，造成句子结构混乱。可直接用 shared bikes 作主语、are 作谓语。注意 shared bikes 是“共享单车”的常见表达。

× ...it is easy to find any chip for us to ride it.

✓ ...it is easy for us to find a bike to ride.

在 a bike to ride 这个结构中，to ride 后面已经省略了被修饰的 bike，不需要再加 it。另根据语境，chip 应为 bike；若原意是“便宜”，cheap 是形容词，但不能放在这里代替单车。