Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答“有”，并用过去时描述自行车和购买者，例如用“my mother bought it for me”。注意过去的经历要保持过去时：用“used to ride”，不要说“come ride”。“because that was”和最后的“in one day I just say mom”意思不完整，建议删去或改成清楚的具体回忆。可用“because”或“and”连接一到两个相关细节，避免填充词过多。

예시: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood by myself. I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without help.

제안: 开头应完整回答，例如“Definitely, they are”，并保持时态一致；谈论当前情况时用一般现在时，而不是“was”或“will ride”。注意主谓一致和数量表达：应说“there are thousands of bikes”，而不是“it's thousands of bike”。用“on campus”描述校园，并把用途说得自然，如“ride to class or the library”。删去重复的“really”和“I could say”，再用一个具体例子支撑观点即可。

예시: Definitely. Bikes are very popular in my country, especially among university students. At my university, there are thousands of bikes on campus, and students often ride them to class or the library. They are convenient and help people get around quickly.

× I have a really small bike for me when I was a child

✓ I had a really small bike when I was a child.

句子说的是童年时期的情况，属于过去，因此要把 have 改为过去式 had。表达“我有一辆小自行车”时，通常不需要加 for me。

× and this my mom bought for me

✓ and my mom bought it for me

原句中的 this 放在这里使句子结构不清楚。可以用 my mom 作主语、bought 作谓语，并用 it 指代前面提到的自行车。

× in one day

✓ One day

表示“有一天”时，one day 前不加介词 in。可以直接说 One day。

× I just say mom

✓ I just said, “Mom.”

这句话叙述的是过去发生的事情，所以 say 应使用过去式 said。

× Definitely is.

✓ Definitely, they are.

原句缺少明确的主语。回答 bikes are popular 时，可以用 they 指代 bikes，并用 are 与主语搭配。

× Really it was really popular.

✓ It is really popular.

这里是在描述自行车目前在本国是否受欢迎，应使用一般现在时 is，而不是表示过去的 was。

× it's thousands of bike in in the campus

✓ There are thousands of bikes on campus.

表达“有成千上万辆自行车”应使用 There be 句型。thousands of bikes 是复数，因此要用 are，不能用缩写 it's。

× thousands of bike

✓ thousands of bikes

thousands of 后面要接可数名词复数，因此 bike 应改为 bikes。

× in the campus

✓ on campus

表示在校园里通常说 on campus，不说 in the campus。

× everyone will ride the bike, go to study, go to library, go to work

✓ Everyone rides a bike to class, the library, or work.

这里是在描述人们通常的习惯，不是将来会发生的事情，因此用一般现在时 rides。改写后也避免了 ride、go 等动词形式不一致的问题。

× go to library

✓ go to the library

library 是可数名词单数，表示去图书馆时通常需要加 the，因此应说 go to the library。