Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答问题，不要把考官的问题重复成疑问句。你的回答意思不够清楚；如果想表达“小时候有一辆自行车，是爸爸在生日时送的”，请把这些信息连成完整句子，并补充一个具体细节，例如你常在哪里骑车。注意使用过去时。

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me for my birthday, and I was really excited. I often rode it around our neighborhood.

제안: 你表达了自行车环保这一相关观点，但“everyone”过于绝对，“Instead of car”和“Environmental Protecting”也不自然。建议先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用具体理由或例子支持观点；可以说人们用自行车代替汽车，从而减少污染。注意使用复数或冠词，并用连接词串联理由。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them for short trips instead of driving. They are affordable and produce no air pollution, so they are an environmentally friendly choice.

× Do you have a bike or you're a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

问题类型：过去时错误。这里是在回答童年时的经历，应使用一般过去时。用“I had”表示过去拥有，而不是现在时“Do you have”。

× A birthday.

✓ It was a birthday present.

问题类型：句子缺少谓语动词。“A birthday”只是名词短语，不能单独构成完整句子。若想表达自行车是生日礼物，可以补上主语和动词：“It was a birthday present.”

× Yes, everyone.

✓ Yes, they are popular with everyone.

问题类型：句子缺少谓语动词。“Yes, everyone”只有肯定词和代词，没有完整表达“自行车很受欢迎”。可补上主语和谓语，改为“Yes, they are popular with everyone.”

× Instead of car, bike is green.

✓ Instead of a car, a bike is more environmentally friendly.

问题类型：冠词错误。这里的可数名词单数“car”和“bike”前需要加冠词“a”。

× Environmental Protecting.

✓ Bikes are environmentally friendly.

问题类型：句子缺少谓语动词。“Environmental Protecting”不是完整句子；补上主语和动词后，句子才完整。“Environmentally friendly”表示“环保的”，比“Environmental Protecting”更符合这里的表达。