Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer responds directly, but it is too brief to develop the conversation. Add a short reason or detail, such as whether you wanted a bike or how you usually got around. Keep the response natural and to one or two sentences.

예시: No, I didn’t. My family lived close to school, so I usually walked instead of riding a bike.

제안: You give a clear opinion and a relevant reason, but the second sentence has a grammatical error and could be more specific. Say “many people use bikes” or “many people ride bikes,” and add an example of where or why people use them.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for short trips to work or the shops because they are convenient and inexpensive.

× There are many people use bike for their day-to-day journey.

✓ There are many people who use bikes for their day-to-day journeys.

The phrase 'There are many people' cannot be followed directly by 'use' as another main verb. Add 'who' to introduce a relative clause describing the people. Use plural 'bikes' and 'journeys' for general activities involving many people.