Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中提到了父母给你买东西，但“blue bag”与问题中的自行车不符，可能应为“blue bike”。注意表达年龄时说“when I was seven”，不要加“years ago”；描述过去的习惯要用过去时，例如“rode it”。“favorite scene”和“loaded”在这里不自然，可以换成“favorite possession”和“rode it home”。先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充颜色、使用频率或骑车的感受。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a blue bike when I was seven, and it quickly became my favorite possession. I rode it home from school almost every day.

제안: 回答直接且理由清楚。表达一般情况时，建议用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“the bike”；“good for environment”应为“good for the environment”。可以再补充一个具体细节，例如共享单车在城市里很常见，或自行车适合短途出行，让回答更充分。

예시: Absolutely. Bikes are quite popular in China because they’re affordable and environmentally friendly. In many cities, shared bikes are easy to find, so people often use them for short trips.

× My parents bought me a blue bag when I was seven years ago.

✓ My parents bought me a blue bag when I was seven.

“when I was seven”已经表达了“当我七岁时”，不能再加“years ago”。如果要表达“七年前”，可以说“seven years ago”，但不能与“when I was seven”连用。

× I almost loaded every day when I was when went home.

✓ I almost loaded every day when I went home.

“when I was when went home”包含重复的“when”，且“when”引导的从句中缺少主语。删去多余的“when I was”，并在从句中保留主语“I”，结构就完整了。

× Absolutely, bikes are popular in China because the bike is really cheap and good for environment.

✓ Absolutely, bikes are popular in China because bikes are really cheap and good for the environment.

前面谈的是复数“bikes”，后面用复数“bikes are”可以保持单复数一致。“environment”前通常需要加定冠词“the”，应说“the environment”。