Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你直接回答了问题，但后面的表达有明显的语法和用词问题。“scared to photo”意思不清楚；如果你想说“害怕摔倒”，可以说“scared of falling”。注意保持过去时一致，应说“didn't ride”或“didn't like bikes”，而不是“don't ride”和“didn't like the bike”。可以补充一个具体原因，让回答更自然。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I was afraid of falling. I preferred walking, so I never really learned to ride one.

제안: 你表达了自己的观点，也尝试解释原因，但部分词语和句子难以理解。“bags”应为“bikes”；“it offers a free wage...”表达不清，可以改成“they are an affordable and convenient way to get around”。注意主谓一致：复数的“bikes”要搭配“they”，并使用清楚的连接词串联理由。你还可以具体说明自行车方便停放或适合短途出行。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in big cities because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around. They’re especially useful for short trips, and they’re easy to park.

× No, I didn't because I was scared to photo, so I don't ride a bike and I even didn't like the bike.

✓ No, I didn't because I was scared of riding a bike, so I didn't ride a bike, and I didn't even like bikes.

结合“小时候骑车”的语境，这里应表达“害怕骑自行车”，可说“be scared of riding a bike”。“of”后面接动词时要用动名词形式“riding”。原文中的“photo”与语境不符，因此这里按“骑车”这一意思修正。

× No, I didn't because I was scared to photo, so I don't ride a bike and I even didn't like the bike.

✓ No, I didn't because I was scared of riding a bike, so I didn't ride a bike, and I didn't even like bikes.

问题询问的是小时候的情况，整句应使用过去时。原文“I don't ride a bike”是现在时，应改为“I didn't ride a bike”。

× No, I didn't because I was scared to photo, so I don't ride a bike and I even didn't like the bike.

✓ No, I didn't because I was scared of riding a bike, so I didn't ride a bike, and I didn't even like bikes.

“even”通常放在助动词“didn't”之后、主要动词“like”之前，因此应说“didn't even like”，而不是“even didn't like”。

× Yeah, I think bags are popular with people in big cities because it offers a free wage a freeway war economically to go everywhere. and it's handled. So it is easy to store it.

✓ Yeah, I think bags are popular with people in big cities because they offer an economical way to get around. So they are easy to store.

主语“bags”是复数，后面的谓语动词应使用“offer”，不能用单数形式“offers”。改写后用“they”指代复数的“bags”，相应地使用“are”。

× Yeah, I think bags are popular with people in big cities because it offers a free wage a freeway war economically to go everywhere. and it's handled. So it is easy to store it.

✓ Yeah, I think bags are popular with people in big cities because they offer an economical way to get around. So they are easy to store.

“bags”是复数，不能用单数代词“it”指代，应使用“they”。后文也要保持指代一致，例如用“they are easy to store”。