Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答没有直接说明小时候是否有自行车，表达也难以理解。先用“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”明确回答，再补充一个具体细节，例如什么时候骑车、骑车的地点或原因。注意使用完整、自然的句子，避免把意思不清楚的词语连在一起。

예시: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 回答中提到了“popular”，但没有清楚说明自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎；“spikes”和“high country”也不符合这里的语境。先直接回答问题，再说明人们骑自行车的原因或常见场景，并用一个连接词（如“because”）串联细节。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride them because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around.

× Just happy to recommend always get one Julian sport so many specific it will be contributing any kind songs of sports.

✓ I was happy to recommend getting one.

原句开头缺少主语和谓语，后面的词组也无法组成完整、清晰的句子。可以先补上主语和谓语（I was），并删除无法判断含义的部分。recommend 后面接表示动作的动词时，通常使用动名词形式 getting。

× Spikes are very popular, high country is a very popular kind of sport.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country, and cycling is a very popular sport.

原句用逗号连接两个可以独立成句的分句，属于逗号拼接。可以加 and 连接两个分句。此外，结合问题语境，将表达整理为“自行车在我的国家很受欢迎，骑行是一项很受欢迎的运动”，使句子完整清楚。