Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Rispondi in modo diretto, poi aggiungi un dettaglio chiaro. La seconda frase è difficile da capire e contiene errori: usa il passato (“used to”) e una formulazione naturale per spiegare come ti spostavi o dove andavi con la famiglia. Evita “Uh” se non è necessario.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. My family usually drove me to places, so I didn’t need one.

제안: La risposta è pertinente, ma correggi “too much car” in “too many cars” e usa espressioni naturali come “ride bikes” e “prefer walking”. Organizza le idee con una frase principale e un connettivo; specifica chi usa meno la bicicletta e perché. Evita di accumulare informazioni in un’unica frase.

예시: Not really. There are too many cars on the roads, and cycling isn’t very common. Many children and teenagers prefer walking or taking the bus.

× Uh, I always work for to go another place with my family.

✓ Uh, I always went to other places with my family.

The speaker is describing childhood, so the past tense is needed. Use went, the past form of go, to describe a repeated past activity.

× Uh, I always work for to go another place with my family.

✓ Uh, I always went to other places with my family.

For to is not the correct construction here. Use went to when describing travel to a place; do not put for before the infinitive in this sentence.

× Not really, because there are too much car and there are also few people with the bike, the child and the teenager to prefer to go walk or to take the bus.

✓ Not really, because there are too many cars, and few people have bikes; children and teenagers prefer to walk or take the bus.

Use many with the plural countable noun cars. Much is used with uncountable nouns, so too much car is incorrect.

× Not really, because there are too much car and there are also few people with the bike, the child and the teenager to prefer to go walk or to take the bus.

✓ Not really, because there are too many cars, and few people have bikes; children and teenagers prefer to walk or take the bus.

Car and bike refer to countable items in general, so use their plural forms, cars and bikes. Children and teenagers also refer to people in general and should be plural.

× Not really, because there are too much car and there are also few people with the bike, the child and the teenager to prefer to go walk or to take the bus.

✓ Not really, because there are too many cars, and few people have bikes; children and teenagers prefer to walk or take the bus.

With the bike is not the natural way to say that people own bicycles. Use have bikes to express ownership.

× Not really, because there are too much car and there are also few people with the bike, the child and the teenager to prefer to go walk or to take the bus.

✓ Not really, because there are too many cars, and few people have bikes; children and teenagers prefer to walk or take the bus.

The phrase the child and the teenager to prefer does not form a complete clause. Use children and teenagers as the subject, followed by the verb prefer.