Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, when I in class one, I have a blue bike.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Yes, I think because in China most of people like to take backs. It very cheap and the deal
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 55.0제안: 先直接回答问题,再补充一个具体细节。注意过去时:说“when I was in Grade 1”,以及“ I had a blue bike”,不要用现在时“have”。
예시: Yes, I did. I had a blue bike when I was in Grade 1, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 35.0제안: 先清楚回答“是的,很受欢迎”,再说明原因。注意用“most people”,而不是“most of people”;“骑自行车”可说“ride bikes”。补全句子,并用“because”或“also”连接理由,例如价格便宜、出行方便。
예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in China. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short trips.
× Yes, when I in class one, I have a blue bike.
✓ Yes, when I was in first grade, I had a blue bike.
这句话描述的是童年时的经历,属于过去时间,因此要用过去时:have 应改为 had。
× when I in class one
✓ when I was in first grade
从句“I in class one”缺少谓语动词。描述过去的状态时,应补上 be 动词过去式 was。
× Yes, I think because in China most of people like to take backs.
✓ Yes, I think so because most people in China like to ride bikes.
“I think because”结构不完整;表达“我这么认为”时可说“I think so because...”。此外,根据上下文,骑自行车应表达为“ride bikes”。
× most of people
✓ most people
“most of”后面通常接有限定词的名词短语,例如“most of the people”。如果名词前没有限定词,应直接说“most people”。
× It very cheap
✓ They are very cheap.
句子缺少 be 动词。描述价格或状态时需要使用 be 动词;这里的主语指复数的自行车,因此应说“They are”。
× It very cheap
✓ They are very cheap.
这里的代词指前文复数的自行车,所以应使用复数代词“They”,而不是单数代词“It”。