Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then add one clear detail about how you used the bike. Use “rode” rather than “drove” for a bicycle, and say “enjoyed riding it” instead of “enjoyed while raining.” Avoid implying that you enjoyed riding in the rain unless that is what you mean.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I especially enjoyed cycling with my friends.

제안: Start with a direct answer and support it with a specific, clearly expressed reason or example. Replace “every youngest young adults” with a natural phrase such as “many young adults,” and explain whether people use bikes for commuting, exercise, or leisure. Avoid the unnecessary opening “And.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young adults. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient, particularly in busy areas.

× When I was a child, I used to have a bicycle which I drove around my neighborhood and I really enjoyed while raining.

✓ When I was a child, I used to have a bicycle that I rode around my neighborhood, and I really enjoyed riding it in the rain.

When enjoy refers to an activity, it is followed by a gerund (a verb ending in -ing), such as enjoyed riding. The phrase while raining does not clearly state what activity you enjoyed; say riding it in the rain.

× And I think bikes are popular in my country because every youngest young adults have bike when and they used to ride it around like doing their work.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because young adults generally have bikes and ride them to get around, including when they go to work.

Every must be followed by a singular countable noun, so every young adult would be grammatical. The original also mixes singular and plural forms. Since you are speaking generally about young adults, use the plural young adults and bikes consistently.

× And I think bikes are popular in my country because every youngest young adults have bike when and they used to ride it around like doing their work.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because young adults generally have bikes and ride them to get around, including when they go to work.

Bike is a singular countable noun and needs an article, as in have a bike. The correction uses the plural bikes, which does not need an article when speaking about bikes in general.

× And I think bikes are popular in my country because every youngest young adults have bike when and they used to ride it around like doing their work.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because young adults generally have bikes and ride them to get around, including when they go to work.

The question asks whether bikes are popular now, so use the simple present to describe a current general habit: young adults ride them. Used to ride describes a past habit instead.

× And I think bikes are popular in my country because every youngest young adults have bike when and they used to ride it around like doing their work.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because young adults generally have bikes and ride them to get around, including when they go to work.

The sequence when and they used to ride it around like doing their work does not form a clear grammatical clause. Connect the ideas directly with and, and use the clear phrase when they go to work.