Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 質問には直接答えられていますが、回答が短く、具体的な情報がありません。子どもの頃にどんな自転車を持っていたか、どのように使っていたかを一つ加えると、より自然で内容のある回答になります。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

제안: 理由を加えている点はよいですが、“I live in countryside” は “I live in the countryside” または “I live in a rural area” とします。また、“it is need to have a own bicycle” は不自然なので、“it is necessary to have your own bicycle” や “people need their own bicycles” と言い換えましょう。国全体についての質問なので、地方では特に便利だという形で答えると、質問にもより直接的に答えられます。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially in rural areas. I live in the countryside, where public transport is limited, so having your own bicycle is very useful.

× I live in countryside so it is need to have a own bicycle.

✓ I live in the countryside, so it is necessary to have a bicycle of my own.

Use the before countryside when referring to the countryside as a general area. A own is incorrect because a cannot be used directly before own in this phrase. Say a bicycle of my own instead.

× I live in countryside so it is need to have a own bicycle.

✓ I live in the countryside, so it is necessary to have a bicycle of my own.

It is need is not a grammatical structure. Use it is necessary to express that something is needed, or say I need to have a bicycle. Choose one structure and use it consistently.