Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: คำตอบเริ่มด้วย “Yeah” แต่ส่วนที่เหลือยังไม่ชัดเจน โดยเฉพาะ “when I was shy” และ “buy in the morning” ควรบอกให้ตรงว่าคุณมีจักรยานหรือไม่ และอธิบายว่าใครซื้อให้หรือคุณขี่ที่ไหน ใช้ past tense เช่น “bought” เมื่อต้องพูดถึงเหตุการณ์ในอดีต

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My aunt and uncle bought it for me, and I often rode it in the mornings.

제안: คุณตอบคำถามโดยตรงว่า “Not really” และพยายามให้เหตุผล แต่ประโยค “my country is half the traffic jams” และ “it’s not famous” ใช้คำไม่เป็นธรรมชาติ ควรพูดว่า “there are a lot of traffic jams” และอธิบายว่าคนจึงนิยมใช้รถยนต์มากกว่า ใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น “because” เพื่อให้เหตุผลชัดเจน

예시: Not really. There are a lot of traffic jams in my country, and many people rely on cars to get around. As a result, cycling isn’t very common.

× Yeah, when I was shy, I usually buy in the morning with my auntie and my uncle.

✓ Yeah, when I was shy, I usually bought one in the morning with my auntie and my uncle.

The sentence refers to a past period, indicated by 'when I was shy,' so the past-tense form 'bought' is needed instead of 'buy.' 'One' makes clear that the speaker bought a bike, as asked in the question.

× Not really. I think my country is half the traffic jams and have many cars in the road, so I think it's not famous. It's my country.

✓ Not really. I think my country has a lot of traffic jams and many cars on the road, so bikes are not very popular there.

The phrase 'my country is half the traffic jams' does not form a clear grammatical structure. Use 'has a lot of traffic jams' to express that the country experiences many traffic jams. The revised final clause also clearly states what is not popular.

× Not really. I think my country is half the traffic jams and have many cars in the road, so I think it's not famous. It's my country.

✓ Not really. I think my country has a lot of traffic jams and many cars on the road, so bikes are not very popular there.

The subject 'my country' is singular, so it must take 'has,' not 'have.' Check that the verb agrees with its subject, even when another noun phrase follows.

× Not really. I think my country is half the traffic jams and have many cars in the road, so I think it's not famous. It's my country.

✓ Not really. I think my country has a lot of traffic jams and many cars on the road, so bikes are not very popular there.

Use 'on the road' rather than 'in the road' when talking about cars traveling along roads. Remember that the appropriate preposition can depend on the meaning and context.