Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I absolutely have a back when I'm a child when I was a child. Every children in Chinese almost have a bag when they were young. And actually
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Yes, it's so popular. Not only the children used it. They adults also use it every day for traveling or working and maybe just
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 30.0제안: 先直接回答问题,并使用过去时,例如 “I had a bike”。注意区分 bike 和 back;“every”后接单数名词,且这里可以说 “Many children in China”。避免反复改口,补充一个具体细节后用完整句子结束回答。
예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue one, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 40.0제안: 用复数 bikes 回答这类泛指问题,例如 “Bikes are very popular”。注意主谓一致,并将 “Not only...” 结构改为自然的 “Not only children, but adults also...”。补充具体用途或原因,并避免以未完成的 “maybe just” 结尾。
예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Not only children but also many adults ride them to work or to nearby shops because they are convenient and inexpensive.
× Yes, I absolutely have a back when I'm a child when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I absolutely had a bike when I was a child.
句子讲的是童年时的经历,属于过去时间,因此应将现在时 have 改为过去式 had。原句中重复出现了 when 引导的时间部分,修改时保留正确的过去时间表达即可。
× Every children in Chinese almost have a bag when they were young.
✓ Almost every child in China had a bike when they were young.
Every 后面应接单数名词,因此 children 应改为 child。可记住结构“every + 单数名词”,例如 every child。
× Every children in Chinese almost have a bag when they were young.
✓ Almost every child in China had a bike when they were young.
when they were young 指过去的时间,所以描述当时拥有自行车应使用过去式 had,而不是 have。回答涉及过去经历时,要让相关动词与过去时间保持一致。
× Yes, it's so popular.
✓ Yes, they are very popular.
问题中的 bikes 是复数,回答时应使用复数代词 they,并搭配 are。回答复数名词时,要避免用单数代词 it。
× Not only the children used it.
✓ Not only children use them.
这里是在说明自行车现在是否受欢迎以及人们的日常习惯,应使用一般现在时。used 是过去式,应改为 use。描述普遍事实或习惯时,通常使用一般现在时。
× Not only the children used it.
✓ Not only children use them.
这里的 it 指代前文的 bikes,是复数概念,因此应改为 them。代词的单复数要与它所指代的名词一致。
× They adults also use it every day for traveling or working and maybe just
✓ The adults also use them every day for traveling or working.
They 是代词,不能直接放在 adults 前作限定词;这里应使用 The adults。另外,it 指代复数的 bikes,应改为 them。使用代词时,要确认其用法以及单复数是否与指代对象一致。