Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 先直接回答，然后用一两个清晰、具体的细节展开即可。注意时态：讲童年经历时用一般过去时，例如“my family bought me”；如果想表达“我拥有过”，用“I had”。“subsidiary cycles”和“two single cycles”不自然，可改为“training wheels”或“a regular bike”。避免重复表达“in my memory I remember”，并减少填充词。

예시: Yes, I had several bikes when I was a child. My family bought me about five in total as I grew up. My first one had training wheels, and later I learned to ride a regular bike.

제안: 回答切题，也提供了观察和理由。可以减少填充词，并把“when you're walking on the street, usually”改成更自然、简洁的表达，例如“you often see them on the streets”。“exercise your balance skills”搭配不自然，可说“improve your balance”或“help people stay fit”。还可以补充一个具体原因，例如骑车方便或环保。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. You often see children and adults riding them in parks and on local streets. Many people enjoy cycling because it’s an easy way to stay fit, improve their balance, and get around without using a car.

× Actually, during my childhood, my family has bought me a lot of bikes.

✓ Actually, during my childhood, my family bought me a lot of bikes.

“During my childhood”指过去的一段时间，因此应使用一般过去时“bought”，而不是现在完成时“has bought”。描述发生在过去且已结束的事情时，使用一般过去时。

× Um, for example, a bike with two subsidiary cycles or just with two single cycles.

✓ Um, for example, I had a bike with two subsidiary cycles, or just one with two single cycles.

原句只是名词短语，没有谓语动词，因此不是完整句子。补上主语“I”和谓语“had”，即可形成完整句子。

× Uh in my um memory I remember I have bought at least five bicycles.

✓ Uh, in my memory, I remember that I bought at least five bicycles.

这里说的是童年期间买过的自行车，属于已经结束的过去经历，应使用一般过去时“bought”，而不是现在完成时“have bought”。

× You can see a lot of uh children and adults riding the bicycles when you're walking on the street, um, usually.

✓ You can usually see a lot of children and adults riding bicycles when you're walking on the street.

这里泛指人们骑自行车，不是指前文提到的某些特定自行车，因此复数名词“bicycles”前通常不加定冠词“the”。