Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
No, I didn't, because my parents think it is perhaps to my save and they wish I can.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Yes, I think because I can see back everywhere and it is good for environment
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 30.0제안: 回答开头直接说明没有自行车。后半句表达不清,注意使用正确的词和时态:可以说父母觉得骑车不安全(unsafe),所以不让你骑。补充一个具体原因即可,例如担心你受伤。
예시: No, I didn’t. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride a bike, so they didn’t let me have one.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 45.0제안: 先直接回答“是的,我认为很受欢迎”,不要用“Yes, I think because”连接。注意表达“到处都能看到自行车”可说“see bikes everywhere”,并在“environment”前加定冠词“the”。可以补充一个具体原因,例如自行车环保、方便通勤。
예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I see them everywhere, especially in busy city centres, because they’re an environmentally friendly and convenient way to get around.
× No, I didn't, because my parents think it is perhaps to my save and they wish I can.
✓ No, I didn't, because my parents thought it might be unsafe for me, and they wouldn't let me have one.
回答谈的是童年时的情况,因此应将一般现在时 think 改为过去时 thought。修改后的整句也保持了与过去语境一致的表达。
× No, I didn't, because my parents think it is perhaps to my save and they wish I can.
✓ No, I didn't, because my parents thought it might be unsafe for me, and they wouldn't let me have one.
这里需要表达“对我来说不安全”,应使用形容词 unsafe。原句中的 save 是动词,不能在这里表达“安全”;可以记住 safe/unsafe 是形容词,常用于描述某事是否安全。
× No, I didn't, because my parents think it is perhaps to my save and they wish I can.
✓ No, I didn't, because my parents thought it might be unsafe for me, and they wouldn't let me have one.
原句中的 can 不适合表达父母不允许我骑车这一过去情境。可以用 wouldn't let me 表达“当时不让/不允许我”,并用 let + 人 + 动词原形(let me have)。
× Yes, I think because I can see back everywhere and it is good for environment
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular because I can see bikes everywhere, and they are good for the environment.
I think 后面需要补出完整的想法内容,例如 bikes are popular。because 引导原因从句,说明为什么认为自行车受欢迎。回答时可以使用“主句 + because + 原因”的完整结构。
× Yes, I think because I can see back everywhere and it is good for environment
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular because I can see bikes everywhere, and they are good for the environment.
environment 在这里指我们共同生活的自然环境,通常说 the environment。记住表达“对环境有好处”时使用 be good for the environment。