Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly using the past tense (“Yes, I did”), then explain how you got the bike and add one clear detail about learning to ride it. Use natural phrases such as “save up money to buy one” and “my neighbors,” and finish your sentence rather than leaving the idea incomplete.

예시: Yes, I did. I saved up my pocket money to buy a bike when I was a child. I wanted one because many of my neighbors rode bikes, and I thought it would be fun to join them. It took me a while to learn, but I enjoyed riding around my neighborhood.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then explain how popularity differs between rural and urban areas. Use “bicycles are popular” rather than “bike is,” and describe their practical use with a complete phrase such as “to get around” or “to travel to nearby places.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular, especially in rural areas. I live in the countryside near the coast, where people often use them to travel to nearby places. They are convenient for children and also help families avoid relying on a car for short trips. In large cities, though, people may use public transport more often.

× Sure, I have when I was shy, I have a bike...

✓ Sure, I did. When I was a child, I had a bike...

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past-tense form had rather than have. Use did to answer the question naturally, and when I was a child fits the question's meaning.

× I have a bike that I collect money to boss it.

✓ I had a bike that I collected money to buy.

This describes a childhood experience, so the verbs should be in the past tense: had and collected. Buy is the appropriate verb for what the speaker appears to mean.

× And first time I want to ride a bike because neighborhoods around me.

✓ I first wanted to ride a bike because people in my neighborhood rode bikes.

The original does not form a complete, clear sentence: the because-clause lacks a clear subject and verb. Use a complete main clause and a complete reason clause.

× And first time I want to ride a bike because neighborhoods around me.

✓ I first wanted to ride a bike because people in my neighborhood rode bikes.

The speaker is describing a past experience, so use wanted and rode rather than present-tense verbs.

× They also have a bike to go and

✓ They also had bikes to get around.

They refers to multiple people, so bikes is more appropriate than a bike when describing bikes they used. The corrected sentence also completes the thought.

× They also have a bike to go and

✓ They also had bikes to get around.

The answer is about the past, so use had rather than have.

× My country is have a different area like my house.

✓ My country has different areas, and my house is in one of them.

Is have is not a grammatical verb construction here. Use has to express possession, and connect the idea about the house in a complete clause.

× My country is have a different area like my house.

✓ My country has different areas, and my house is in one of them.

The speaker refers to multiple areas, so use the plural noun areas rather than the singular area.

× It's situated near beach...

✓ It's situated near the beach...

Beach is a singular countable noun here, so it needs a determiner. Use the before beach when referring to the nearby beach.

× ...so I think bike is uh most essential to bring children to go anywhere.

✓ ...so I think bikes are essential for taking children anywhere.

Bikes refers to bicycles in general, so use the plural noun bikes and the plural verb are.

× ...most essential to bring children to go anywhere.

✓ ...essential for taking children anywhere.

After the preposition for, use a gerund form such as taking. The phrase taking children anywhere also avoids the ungrammatical construction to bring children to go anywhere.