Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is direct and grammatically correct, but it is very brief. Add one relevant detail, such as why you did not have a bike or what you did instead. This will make your response more developed while keeping it concise.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it would be safer for me to walk to school, which was only a short distance away.

제안: Answer the question clearly, then give a specific reason or example. The phrase “everyone is riding after 18 plus” is difficult to understand, and the government-rule explanation is unclear. Use “cycling” or “bicycles” where appropriate, and explain the rule precisely if it is relevant.

예시: Yes, cycling is quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride bicycles to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. Some cities also have bike lanes, which make cycling safer.

× It's pretty good that everyone is riding after 18 plus because of the rules of the government.

✓ It's pretty good that everyone rides after the age of 18 because of government rules.

After 18 plus is not a standard way to express an age in this sentence. Use after the age of 18 or after turning 18. The present simple rides is also more suitable for describing a general habit.