Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then add one or two relevant details. Use the past tense consistently: say “I was 15” and “until I was 18.” “My first bike” sounds more natural than “the first bike in my life,” and “a very small blue bike” is a more natural word order. Avoid fillers such as “uh” and clarify whether you rode to school regularly.

예시: Yes, I got my first bike when I was 15. It was a small blue bike, and I rode it to school regularly until I was 18.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and complete your explanation. Use linking words such as “First” and “Also,” but avoid repeating words. To express your ideas naturally, say that bikes help people avoid traffic and are a healthy way to get exercise. Use “when there is traffic” rather than “when you got traffic,” and finish your final thought.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. First, they’re convenient because people can avoid traffic, especially in busy cities. Also, cycling is a healthy way to get regular exercise.

× I usually went to school by bike about until I I'm 18.

✓ I usually went to school by bike until I was about 18.

The answer describes a past period, so use the past-tense form was, not the present-tense form I'm. Keep about next to 18 to show that the age is approximate.

× I usually went to school by bike about until I I'm 18.

✓ I usually went to school by bike until I was about 18.

About indicates an approximate age, so place it before 18 rather than before until. This makes clear that the speaker stopped riding to school at approximately age 18.

× Yes, first it's very easy uh to to to go to somewhere when you got traffic and the second is a very very healthy tool to make your body get more

✓ Yes, first, it's very easy to go somewhere when there's traffic, and second, bikes are a very healthy way to get more exercise.

Somewhere already expresses the destination, so it does not take the preposition to. Use go somewhere, not go to somewhere.

× Yes, first it's very easy uh to to to go to somewhere when you got traffic and the second is a very very healthy tool to make your body get more

✓ Yes, first, it's very easy to go somewhere when there's traffic, and second, bikes are a very healthy way to get more exercise.

The answer gives general reasons why bikes are popular, so use the present tense. Got is past tense; there's traffic expresses the general situation in the present. The transcript ends mid-thought, so the ending is completed with a likely intended idea.