Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly using the past tense: say “I had a bike” rather than “I have a bike.” Avoid repeating words, and use natural phrasing such as “blue and grey” and “ride it around the park.” Add one specific detail about what you enjoyed doing with it.

예시: Yes, I had a blue-and-grey bike when I was a child. I thought it looked stylish, and I often rode it around the park near my home. I enjoyed showing it to my friends.

제안: State your opinion clearly with “In my opinion” or “Yes, I think so.” Avoid repeating phrases and replace unclear wording such as “go free riding” and “it’s so pretty much of a bike.” Give a clear, specific reason—for example, that bikes are convenient for short trips or recreation—and use correct verb forms.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips to nearby shops or parks because they are convenient and inexpensive. They’re also a popular way to exercise.

× Yeah, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a completed period in the past, so use the past-tense form had rather than have. Match the tense of the verb to the past-time phrase when I was a child.

× It is it is blue with grey in it and it's very stylish and also I like it when I get it.

✓ It was blue with grey on it, and it was very stylish. I also liked it when I got it.

The answer describes a bike from the speaker's childhood, so the past-tense forms was, liked, and got are appropriate. Use past tense consistently when describing a past possession and the speaker's past feelings about it.

× And I'm riding it all over the park to show others about it.

✓ I rode it all over the park to show it to others.

The question asks about the speaker's childhood, so use the past-tense form rode rather than the present progressive am riding. The revised sentence also uses a natural verb pattern: show something to someone.

× Yeah, from my opinion, I think the bikes are popular in our country because most people ride bikes to parks or to local areas where you can where you can just go free riding and not hurting anyone.

✓ Yeah, in my opinion, bikes are popular in our country because most people ride them to parks or local areas where they can ride freely without hurting anyone.

The standard expression is in my opinion, not from my opinion. Use without before a verb ending in -ing, as in without hurting. The repeated phrase where you can is a speech repetition and has been removed for clarity.

× Also, it's it's so pretty much of a bike in our country.

✓ Also, bikes are very popular in our country.

The original phrase does not form a clear grammatical sentence: it's so pretty much of a bike does not express how common bikes are. Use a clear subject and verb, such as bikes are, followed by the description very popular. The repeated it's is a speech repetition.