Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly, then explain briefly how you got a bike later. Use natural phrases such as “I came from a middle-class family” and “I saved up for one.” The middle section of your answer is difficult to understand, so avoid restarting and choose a clear, simple explanation. Also clarify what you use the bike for.

예시: I didn’t have my own bike as a child because my family couldn’t afford one. Later, I saved up and bought a bike of my own. These days, I use it to get around and visit nearby places.

제안: You give a relevant reason, but make the answer more fluent by avoiding repeated phrases such as “It is because.” Use “motorbikes” consistently to clarify what kind of bike you mean, and say that Nepal’s hilly terrain makes them practical. Check subject–verb agreement and comparisons: “motorbikes are” and “easier than cars or buses.”

예시: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in Nepal. Much of the country is hilly, so they can be easier to ride on narrow, winding roads than cars or buses. They’re also convenient for getting around in busy towns.

× Well, originally I belonged from the middle class family, so when I was kid I didn't have my own bike, but later on by doing some s greatest struggle to s- make some money about me.

✓ Well, I originally came from a middle-class family, so when I was a child, I didn't have my own bike. Later, after making a great effort to earn money for myself, I got my own bike.

Belonged does not take from; it is normally followed by to. Since you are describing your family background, came from is the appropriate expression. Use for myself, not about me, to express that you earned money for your own benefit.

× Well, originally I belonged from the middle class family, so when I was kid I didn't have my own bike, but later on by doing some s greatest struggle to s- make some money about me.

✓ Well, I originally came from a middle-class family, so when I was a child, I didn't have my own bike. Later, after making a great effort to earn money for myself, I got my own bike.

Use a before singular countable nouns such as family and child when they are introduced in this way. The corrected sentence uses a middle-class family and a child.

× Nowadays I do have my own bike which I always use to go another thing and another region also.

✓ Nowadays, I do have my own bike, which I always use to go to other places and regions.

The verb go needs the preposition to before a destination. Use go to other places and regions rather than go another region. Other places also expresses the intended meaning more clearly than another thing.

× Yes, I think the bike are quite popular here in my country, Nepal.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular here in my country, Nepal.

The sentence refers to bikes in general, so use the plural noun bikes rather than the singular bike. The plural subject also takes are.

× It is because uh the geography of our country is very s- uh fantastically suit for the motorbike.

✓ This is because the geography of our country is very well suited to motorbikes.

After is, use the past participle suited to form the expression is suited. Suit is the base form and does not fit this construction. Well is a natural adverb to describe how suitable something is.

× It is because uh the geography of our country is very s- uh fantastically suit for the motorbike.

✓ This is because the geography of our country is very well suited to motorbikes.

The standard expression is suited to something. Use to rather than for in this construction.

× It is because we do have lots of up ups and down here in Nepal.

✓ We have lots of ups and downs here in Nepal.

The expression ups and downs uses plural forms for both parts. Also, lots of is followed by a plural noun in this sentence.

× So it is good to ride motorbike than other four-wheeler vehicles such as car and buses.

✓ So it is better to ride a motorbike than to use other four-wheeled vehicles, such as cars and buses.

When comparing two options with than, use the comparative form better rather than good. Keeping the to before use makes the two sides of the comparison parallel.

× So it is good to ride motorbike than other four-wheeler vehicles such as car and buses.

✓ So it is better to ride a motorbike than to use other four-wheeled vehicles, such as cars and buses.

Motorbike and car are singular countable nouns here, so they need articles or plural forms. The correction uses a motorbike and plural cars.

× So it is good to ride motorbike than other four-wheeler vehicles such as car and buses.

✓ So it is better to ride a motorbike than to use other four-wheeled vehicles, such as cars and buses.

The examples refer to vehicles in general, so use the plural cars. Four-wheeled also agrees with the plural noun vehicles.