Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
No, when I was a child, I can't ride a bag.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
No, I couldn't ride a bike when I was a child. I didn't know how to balance my and my parents didn't teach me, so I only learned to ride when I was 27 years old.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答基本回应了问题,但“bag”应为“bike”,而且谈过去的经历要用过去时“couldn’t ride”。可以补充一个简短、具体的原因或相关经历,让回答更自然完整。
예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I couldn’t ride one. I was a little afraid of falling, so I never learned at the time.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 30.0제안: 这段回答没有直接说明自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎,内容主要转向了你个人何时学会骑车。先明确回答“受欢迎”或“不太受欢迎”,再用具体原因或例子支持;如果提到个人经历,可作为补充。注意“balance my”表达不完整,可说“keep my balance on a bike”。
예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people use them for short trips because they’re affordable and convenient. I learned to ride one when I was 27, so I understand why some people find it challenging at first.
× No, when I was a child, I can't ride a bag.
✓ No, when I was a child, I couldn't ride a bike.
句子描述的是童年时的能力,属于过去的情境,因此应使用表示过去能力的 couldn't,而不是表示现在能力的 can't。根据上下文,bag 应为 bike。
× I didn't know how to balance my and my parents didn't teach me, so I only learned to ride when I was 27 years old.
✓ I didn't know how to balance myself, and my parents didn't teach me, so I only learned to ride when I was 27 years old.
my 是物主限定词,后面需要接名词,不能单独表示“我自己”。这里应使用反身代词 myself,表示“保持身体平衡”。另外,用 and 连接两个完整分句,能让句子结构更清楚。