Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, “I had our bike”는 소유 관계가 어색하고 어떤 자전거인지 불분명합니다. 본인 소유였다면 “I had a bike” 또는 “I had my own bike”라고 하세요. 자전거를 어디서 탔는지, 얼마나 자주 탔는지 같은 구체적인 내용을 한 문장 덧붙이면 답변이 더 자연스럽고 충분해집니다.

예시: Yes, I did. I had my own bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

제안: 의견을 분명히 밝힌 점은 좋지만, “when they start to work”는 ‘일을 시작할 때’라는 뜻으로 들릴 수 있습니다. 출근할 때를 의미한다면 “when they go to work” 또는 “to commute to work”라고 표현하세요. 또한 “Of course” 대신 자연스러운 이유나 구체적인 예를 덧붙이고, 자전거가 어떤 사람들에게 인기 있는지도 설명해 보세요.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities with bike lanes. Many people use them to commute to work because cycling is affordable and helps them avoid traffic.

× When I was young, I had our bike.

✓ When I was young, I had my own bike.

Our refers to something shared by the speaker and other people, but the answer describes a bike the student personally had. Use my or my own to match the subject I.