Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，并提供了礼物来源、骑车地点和活动等具体细节。建议删去“um”和“uh”等填充词，让表达更流畅；另外，“which made me really excited”指代不够自然，可以改为“which was really exciting”或说明骑车比赛让你感到兴奋。

예시: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my eighth birthday, and I often rode it around the park with my friends. We used to race each other, which was always exciting.

제안: 回答直接，并用价格、便利性和共享单车举例支撑观点，内容具体且逻辑清楚。建议避免用“And”单独开启新句，可用“Also”或将信息合并；还可以加入一个简短的个人观察，使回答更自然。

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient for short journeys. Many cities also have bike-sharing schemes, and people often use them to commute to work or school, especially during rush hour. I often see people using them near train stations.