Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly answers the question, but it mostly repeats the examiner's wording. Add one specific detail, such as when you got the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it.

예시: Yes, I did. I got a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: You give an opinion, but the answer contains self-corrections, hesitation, and an unfinished thought. Use a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason or example. Check subject-verb agreement and use “these bikes” or “they have bikes,” rather than “this bikes.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and people who live in smaller towns. For example, many of my friends rode their bikes to school when we were in elementary school.

× Umm, my friends, ever since elementary days, they have this bikes that are I don't know.

✓ Umm, my friends have had these bikes since elementary school.

The plural noun bikes needs the plural demonstrative these, not this. Use these with plural nouns and this with singular nouns. The phrase ever since also calls for a present perfect construction to describe something that began in the past and continues to the present, so have had is appropriate here.