Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly and avoid contradicting yourself: say that you did have a bicycle. Use the past tense for childhood experiences ("I had," "it was," and "I rode"), and describe its name and appearance in clear, natural phrases. Replace "with on that bicycle" with "on it." Add one specific detail about why you liked it.

예시: Yes, I had a black bicycle when I was a child. I rode it to school from Grade 5 to Grade 10, and it was about three feet tall. I called it Royal Rules, and I enjoyed riding it because it gave me a sense of independence.

제안: Use "popular" rather than "powerful" to answer the question directly. Organize your response with a clear reason and an example: mention India's mountainous terrain and explain why adventure bikes appeal to young people. Use natural phrasing such as "young people choose" and "places like Ladakh," and avoid repeating "in my country."

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in India, especially adventure bikes. Many young people choose them because India has mountainous regions and plenty of off-road routes. For example, riders often take these bikes to places like Ladakh, where they are useful on rough terrain.

× Yes, uh, I'm not having a bike but I'm having a bicycle where his name is our Royal Rules.

✓ Yes, I didn't have a bike, but I had a bicycle called Royal Rules.

The question asks about your childhood, so use the past tense. Use didn't have and had rather than I'm not having and I'm having. Called is a natural way to introduce the bicycle's name.

× So it is in black color and uh three feet high. So it is good.

✓ It was black and about three feet high, and it was good.

These details describe the bicycle in the past, so use was rather than is. You can also describe its color directly by saying it was black.

× When I was a child from grade 5th to 10th, I usually go to my school with on that bicycle.

✓ When I was a child, from fifth to tenth grade, I usually went to school on that bicycle.

Use went, the past form of go, because the sentence describes a past routine. The phrase on that bicycle is also the correct way to describe traveling by bicycle.

× When I was a child from grade 5th to 10th, I usually go to my school with on that bicycle.

✓ When I was a child, from fifth to tenth grade, I usually went to school on that bicycle.

With on combines two prepositions incorrectly here. Use on that bicycle to describe the means of travel; do not add with.

× Yes, uh, bikes are more powerful in my country, uh, mostly with uh the adventure bikes where and in our country, India it's having a mountain, uh, hills and uh uh off-roads and Leila Dak.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially adventure bikes. India has mountains, hills, off-road areas, and Ladakh.

The question asks whether bikes are popular, so popular is the appropriate adjective. Powerful describes strength, not popularity. Use popular to answer the question directly.

× Yes, uh, bikes are more powerful in my country, uh, mostly with uh the adventure bikes where and in our country, India it's having a mountain, uh, hills and uh uh off-roads and Leila Dak.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially adventure bikes. India has mountains, hills, off-road areas, and Ladakh.

The phrase where and does not connect the ideas into a grammatical sentence. Separate the ideas clearly, and use especially to specify which kinds of bikes are popular.

× Yes, uh, bikes are more powerful in my country, uh, mostly with uh the adventure bikes where and in our country, India it's having a mountain, uh, hills and uh uh off-roads and Leila Dak.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially adventure bikes. India has mountains, hills, off-road areas, and Ladakh.

For a general fact about a country, use the simple present has. Having is not appropriate in this sentence; say India has mountains and other terrain.

× Yes, uh, bikes are more powerful in my country, uh, mostly with uh the adventure bikes where and in our country, India it's having a mountain, uh, hills and uh uh off-roads and Leila Dak.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially adventure bikes. India has mountains, hills, off-road areas, and Ladakh.

The list refers to several landforms, so use the plural mountains rather than the singular a mountain. Keep the items in the list in a consistent plural or category form.

× So most of the youngsters they are picking the adventure bikes to go uh to that particular places.

✓ So most young people choose adventure bikes to go to those particular places.

Most young people is already the subject, so the extra subject pronoun they is unnecessary. Use one subject, not both the noun phrase and a pronoun referring to it.

× So most of the youngsters they are picking the adventure bikes to go uh to that particular places.

✓ So most young people choose adventure bikes to go to those particular places.

Places is plural, so use the plural demonstrative those rather than the singular that. Say those particular places.