Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer responds directly, but it is too brief to develop the conversation. Add one or two relevant details, such as when you learned to ride, how often you used your bike, or where you rode. Keep the response natural and concise.

예시: Yes, I did. I learned to ride when I was about seven, and I often rode my bike around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: The answer is difficult to understand, so make your main opinion clear first. Use the word “bikes” consistently, then support your opinion with a specific reason or example. Avoid unclear phrases and aim for two or three connected sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient. However, in big cities, people may prefer public transport because traffic can be heavy.

× Most of the people use banks go to work.

✓ Most people use bikes to go to work.

The original sentence is missing to before go, which is needed to express purpose after use bikes. Most people is the more natural general expression; most of the people is used when referring to a specific group. Banks appears to be a transcription error for bikes, so please verify the intended word.