Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答切题，但要注意时态和被动语态：谈童年经历应使用过去时，正确表达是“it was stolen”。“by others”在这里不自然，可以省略。建议补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你平时骑车做什么。

예시: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child, but it was stolen when I was about ten. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

제안: 回答了问题，但“others countries”应改为“other countries”；“ride with friends, family”可改为“ride with friends and family”。“It's meaningful”比较笼统，建议具体说明骑自行车受欢迎的原因，并用连接词把理由串联起来。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially for short trips. Besides, people often ride with friends or family for exercise and to enjoy the outdoors.

× Yes, I have a bike but it stole by others.

✓ Yes, I had a bike, but it was stolen by others.

问题谈的是你小时候的经历，因此应使用过去时。原句中的“have”是现在时，应改为“had”。回答过去经历时，注意让动词时态与问题中的时间保持一致。

× Yes, I have a bike but it stole by others.

✓ Yes, I had a bike, but it was stolen by others.

自行车是“被别人偷走的”，所以需要使用被动语态：be动词 + 过去分词。这里应使用“was stolen”，不能说“it stole”。描述过去发生的被动动作时，可用“was/were + 过去分词”。

× Yes, of course, not only in our country, but also in others countries.

✓ Yes, of course, not only in our country, but also in other countries.

“others”是代词，不能直接放在名词“countries”前作限定词。名词前应使用“other”，因此应说“other countries”。请区分“other + 名词”和单独使用的“others”。