Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接，也提供了具体细节。主要问题是“spent about one month to study to learn”表达重复且不自然；可以用“spent about a month learning”或“practised for about a month”。结尾可补充一个简短的回忆，让回答更生动。

예시: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bicycle for my birthday when I was a child. I spent about a month learning to ride it, and I was really excited when I finally managed to ride on my own.

제안: 回答表达了明确观点，但“Absolutely yes”不够自然，后面的“umm”和重复的“use it, use them”影响流畅度。“daily travel tool”也不地道，可改为“a common way to get around”或“a means of transport”。建议用完整句子，并加一个具体原因或例子。

예시: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them to commute or run errands because they’re convenient and inexpensive. You can also see shared bikes parked near bus and subway stations.

× When I was a child, my father bought me a bicycle as my birthday gift, and then I spent about one month to study to learn how to ride the bike.

✓ When I was a child, my father bought me a bicycle as a birthday gift, and then I spent about one month learning how to ride it.

“Spend”表示花费时间做某事时，后面通常接动词的 -ing 形式，因此应说“spent about one month learning”。此外，“to study to learn”表达重复，改为“learning how to ride it”更自然。

× People use it, use them as a daily travel tool.

✓ People use them as a daily means of transportation.

“Bikes”是复数，因此代词应使用“them”，不能用单数代词“it”。原句中的“use it, use them”也重复了动词短语；保留“use them”即可。