Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答内容与问题相关，但“bought a bag”与自行车不符，可能是想说“bought me a bike”；注意使用正确的时态和句子结构，例如过去经历用一般过去时，“when I was in primary school”。表达骑车上学可说“ride it to school”，不要说“use it for schools road”。最后可补充朋友的反应，但要使用自然的表达，如“my friends admired me”。

예시: Yes, I did. My mom bought me a bike when I was in primary school, and I rode it to school every day. My friends thought it was really cool.

제안: 先直接回答自行车是否受欢迎，再说明不同年龄群体的使用情况。“I think this question is for different kinds of people”表达不自然，可删去或改成清晰的观点句。描述一般情况时用一般现在时，并注意主谓一致和冠词，例如“teenagers usually use bikes”；“go school”应改为“go to school”。可以补充成年人较少骑车的原因，使回答更具体。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular among teenagers in my country. Many of them ride to school or to their friends’ homes because it’s convenient and inexpensive. Adults tend to use cars or public transport instead.

× when I in primary school

✓ when I was in primary school

这里的从句缺少谓语动词。描述过去在小学就读的状态时，需要使用 be 动词过去式 was。

× I use it for schools road

✓ I used it on the road to school

这句话描述的是小时候的经历，应使用过去时 used，而不是现在时 use。表示“在去学校的路上”时，可以说 on the road to school。

× my friend is very admire me

✓ my friend admired me very much

very 通常不能直接修饰动词 admire。可以用 very much 修饰动词，表示“非常”；结合过去经历，句子应为 my friend admired me very much。

× my friend is very admire me

✓ my friend admired me very much

这里讲的是小时候发生的事情，应使用动词过去式 admired。原句中的 is 与动词 admire 的搭配也不成立。

× the teenager usually used bicycle ... and the adult not

✓ Teenagers in my country usually use bicycles to go to school or go home, but adults don't

这里是在泛指一类人和自行车，应使用复数 teenagers、bicycles 和 adults，而不是单数形式。

× the teenager usually used bicycle to go school or go home

✓ Teenagers in my country usually use bicycles to go to school or go home

句子描述的是本国青少年通常的习惯，应使用一般现在时。主语 teenagers 是复数，因此用 use，而不是过去式 used。

× go school

✓ go to school

go 后面表示“去某地”时通常需要介词 to，因此应说 go to school。

× I in my country, the teenager usually used bicycle to go school or go home, and the adult not.

✓ In my country, teenagers usually use bicycles to go to school or go home, but adults don't.

原句开头的 I in my country 缺少谓语，句子结构不完整；结尾的 the adult not 也缺少助动词。可以将地点状语 In my country 放在句首，并用 adults don't 表示“成年人不这样做”。