Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
수험생
Yes, I had a bag when I was a child where I'm primary students. I needed to ride a bike to go to school. It take 10 minutes of writing time.
시험관
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
수험생
Bags are very popular in our country and in this time from the home to the metro station, we the people usually take the public bags. We called the project as last mile.
평가
총점
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
점수: 25.0제안: 先直接回答问题，并统一使用“bike”，不要误说成“bag”。用过去时描述童年经历：例如将“I'm primary students”改为“when I was in primary school”，将“It take”改为“It took”。最后用具体信息补充骑车上学的情况，注意控制在三句话左右。
예시: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was in primary school, and I rode it to school every day. It took me about ten minutes to get there.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
점수: 20.0제안: 开头要明确回答“bikes 是否受欢迎”，并使用正确词汇“bikes”或“shared bikes”，而不是“bags”。接着说明人们如何使用共享单车，例如从家骑到地铁站；用“last-mile connection”表达“最后一公里接驳”，并注意使用一般现在时。
예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use shared bikes to travel from home to the nearest metro station. They’re a convenient way to cover the last mile of a journey.
문법
× Yes, I had a bag when I was a child where I'm primary students.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, when I was in primary school.
这里用 where 引导时间内容不恰当，应改为 when；“when I was in primary school”能清楚表达“我上小学时”。建议用合适的连接词来表达时间关系。
× Yes, I had a bag when I was a child where I'm primary students.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, when I was in primary school.
句子描述的是童年时期，属于过去，因此不能用现在时 I'm，应使用过去时 was。讲述过去的经历时，要确保相关动词都与过去时间一致。
× Yes, I had a bag when I was a child where I'm primary students.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, when I was in primary school.
表示“我是一个小学生”时，student 应用单数；不过更自然的说法是“in primary school”，不需要使用 student。注意名词单复数要与表达的数量及句子结构相符。
× It take 10 minutes of writing time.
✓ It took me 10 minutes to ride to school.
这句话描述的是过去上学所需的时间，因此 take 应使用过去式 took。表达“花多少时间做某事”时，可以使用“It took + 人 + 时间 + to do something”的句型。
× Bags are very popular in our country and in this time from the home to the metro station, we the people usually take the public bags.
✓ Bikes are very popular in our country. Nowadays, people usually ride public bikes from home to the metro station.
原句把时间表达、地点状语和主句混在一起，结构不清楚；“we the people”也不需要同时使用。建议拆分句子，并把时间和地点信息放在清晰的位置。
× We called the project as last mile.
✓ We call this project the “last mile.”
这里是在说明目前使用的项目名称，应该用一般现在时 call，而不是过去式 called。描述普遍事实或当前情况时，通常使用一般现在时。
× We called the project as last mile.
✓ We call this project the “last mile.”
动词 call 表示“把某物称为……”时，结构是“call + 宾语 + 名称”，不需要加 as。建议记住“call something something”这一搭配。
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