Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You answer the question directly and include a relevant personal detail. However, “brought it to me” is not the natural phrase if your father purchased the bike; say “bought it for me.” You could also add a brief detail about how you used it to make your answer more vivid.

예시: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me when I was six, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood after school.

제안: You give a clear opinion and try to support it with an observation, but make sure to say “bikes,” not “spikes.” Use “among children” rather than “especially children,” and say “ride their bikes” instead of “drive their bikes.” Add a specific example and use a linking phrase such as “for example.”

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially among children. For example, I often see kids riding their bikes around the park at weekends.

× Yes, I think spikes are popular in my country, especially children, because at the park I usually see children drive their bice everywhere.

✓ Yes, I think spikes are popular in my country, especially among children, because at the park I usually see children drive their bice everywhere.

The phrase especially children needs a preposition to show the group among whom bikes are popular. Use especially among children. The spelling of spikes and bice and the word choice drive are outside the grammar categories provided, so they have not been changed.