Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answering directly is a good start, and the birthday detail makes your response personal. However, “Bicycle it” is unclear, “pink and bluish in colour” is unnatural, and “It’s still in” is incomplete. Use clear, complete sentences and explain whether you still have the bike or what happened to it.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved it. It was pink and blue, and my father bought it for my fifth birthday. I rode it around my neighbourhood, but I don’t have it anymore.

제안: You give a clear opinion and try to support it with reasons. Improve the response by correcting “Even day-to-day life,” avoiding the repeated “don’t,” and separating the ideas into complete sentences. Specify whether you mean bicycles or motorbikes, and explain more clearly how they help people get around. The final sentence is too long and should be divided.

예시: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country, especially for everyday travel. They are convenient in heavy traffic and don’t take up much space when parked. Some people also use them for longer journeys of around 50 to 60 kilometres.

× Bicycle it.

✓ I rode it.

As written, this is not a clear, well-formed sentence in this context. Use a subject and a verb that clearly express the intended meaning, such as I rode it.

× It was a pink and bluish in colour.

✓ It was pink and bluish in colour.

Do not use a before the adjectives here. The sentence describes the bike’s colour, so the adjectives directly follow was.

× It's still in.

✓ It's still in good condition.

In is a preposition that needs an object in this sentence. Add the missing phrase to complete the thought; good condition is one possible intended meaning.

× Even day-to-day life bikes are the most used ones as it helps in crossing the road in traffic easily.

✓ Even in day-to-day life, bikes are the most used ones as it helps in crossing the road in traffic easily.

The phrase day-to-day life needs the preposition in after even. Use even in day-to-day life.

× Even day-to-day life bikes are the most used ones as it helps in crossing the road in traffic easily.

✓ Even in day-to-day life, bikes are the most used ones as they help in crossing the road in traffic easily.

Bikes is plural, so the pronoun referring to bikes must also be plural: they, not it. The verb must agree with that pronoun: they help, not it helps.

× People usually travel 50 to 60 kilometers by bike easily in our country it's a very popular way.

✓ People in our country usually travel 50 to 60 kilometers by bike; it is a very popular way to get around.

The original joins two independent clauses without appropriate punctuation or a conjunction, creating a run-on sentence. Separate them with a semicolon, or connect them with a conjunction such as and.