Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答基本直接，但问题问的是童年经历，应使用过去时；“I do not have one”表示现在没有，时态不符。可以先简洁回答，再补充一个具体细节，例如是否骑过朋友的自行车。

예시: No, I didn’t. My family didn’t have enough space for one, so I sometimes borrowed my friend’s bike.

제안: 先直接说明自行车现在是否受欢迎，再解释原因。避免重复和过多填充词；“When I was a children”应改为“When I was a child”，“include”应改为“including”，且“it”指代不清。题目问当前情况，若要比较过去和现在，请明确使用过去时和现在时，并用具体例子支撑观点。

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially electric bikes. They’re convenient and faster than ordinary bikes, so many people use them for commuting. Compared with when I was a child, I think more people ride them now.

× No, I do not have one.

✓ No, I didn't have one.

问题询问的是你小时候是否有自行车，时间发生在过去，因此回答也应使用一般过去时。将“do not have”改为“didn't have”。

× When I was a children, uh, it's not is it's not it's not popular.

✓ When I was a child, uh, it wasn't popular.

“a”后面应接单数可数名词，因此应使用“child”，不能使用复数“children”。

× When I was a children, uh, it's not is it's not it's not popular.

✓ When I was a child, uh, it wasn't popular.

“When I was a child”指过去的时间，描述当时自行车不流行也应使用过去时，所以将“it's not”改为“it wasn't”。

× A lot of people, include younger or elders, they prefer, uh, e-bikes because it is more convenient and faster.

✓ A lot of people, including younger and older people, prefer e-bikes because they are more convenient and faster.

“include”不能直接用作补充说明“people”的形式；这里应使用“including”（现在分词），表示“包括……在内”。

× A lot of people, include younger or elders, they prefer, uh, e-bikes because it is more convenient and faster.

✓ A lot of people, including younger and older people, prefer e-bikes because they are more convenient and faster.

句子的主语已经是“A lot of people”，后面再加“they”会造成主语重复。删除“they”，让“prefer”直接承接主语。

× A lot of people, include younger or elders, they prefer, uh, e-bikes because it is more convenient and faster.

✓ A lot of people, including younger and older people, prefer e-bikes because they are more convenient and faster.

“e-bikes”是复数，因此后文应使用复数代词“they”和复数动词“are”，不能用单数的“it is”。